Emphasis Alternative: technically nothing wrong with sentence as is
"Ask anybody and they’ll tell you I’m the one who should’ve gone down in that plane instead of them.”
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Problem with word order.
Doesn't sound quite right.
Change:
"....... I mean, I hardly ever even know myself."
To:
"....... I mean, even I hardly ever know myself."