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Why would he—?
"Um." I clear my throat,
Why would he—?
"Um." I clear my throat,
ake a seat," he says, pointing to a chair behind the counter. "I'll help with this. Your hands are trembling."
I glance down. He's right. They're shaking — courtesy of Mr. Hermes Grande.
"So, the CEO instructed you to do this?" he asks, already feeding a file into the machine.
I massage my wrist. "What do you think?"
Chris chuckles softly. "Wow, he's going full-on with you. Well, it's kinda reassuring to see you handling it just fine."
I blink. What?
I raise my gaze, conf
I glance down. He's right. They're shaking — courtesy of Mr. Hermes Grande.
"So, the CEO instructed you to do this?" he asks, already feeding a file into the machine.
I massage my wrist. "What do you think?"
Chris chuckles softly. "Wow, he's going full-on with you. Well, it's kinda reassuring to see you handling it just fine."
I blink. What?
I raise my gaze, conf
careful, but her fingers hesitate just a beat too long, and the cup tilts.
My hand shoots out
My hand shoots out
Impressions
👍Worth reading
It was long, but I really liked it!
There are quite a few errors, though. For instance, at one point they say they’re going to get married on a certain day. Then she goes to meet his dad, he comes over for dinner, and they’re in Greece. Later, on the wedding day, they’re out in the fields with their friends, and the text makes it sound as though they’re getting married on the same day they originally said they would.
It sounds a bit strange and confusing. I think the timeline could be clearer.
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