Only two days had passed since I’d seen Brody, yet I still couldn’t get him out of my mind.
Contradictory: 'only' 'yet' 'still'
They don't match making it difficult to identify the purpose and/or POV.
The use of only implies a short period of time to achieve a goal, still implying it's been or gone on for too long.
b7149819803has quoted10 months ago
saw her.” Brody paused, lifted his glass from the table, and swallowed back the remainder of his drink. “Until this Tuesday.”
lerontretyakhas quoted3 years ago
Even though I’d worked eighty hours a week the last few years to get where I was, the men who worked thirty were the first ones to blame my success on my magical vagina. Screw them.
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I shook my head. Then I reached down for the other ball. I flipped it over and found: